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Continuation of Fertile Valley

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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby Bryce101 » Sat Jan 14, 2017 6:00 pm

Very nice! That face off was epic!

So were nearing the end here and the main characters are off the drugs. It stands to reason that they would have an after effect so we can expect everyone to continue to get massive. In all the hubbub I forgot that Bill got Claire and Jenny pregnant after the fact which means that we could yet see them massively pregnant in the Epilogue.

I think the fact the family is no longer on fertility drugs helps because this could complicate the rest of the pregnancy and possibly hinder labor. That could potentially lead to what I said before, the family doing everything they can to induce labor from working out to sex. Im kinda sad that Maggie popped like this because it wouldve been awesome if she and Peggy had a preggo face off one more time to provoke Bill to try to induce labor but thems the breaks. We still have Jenny and Claire to look forward to and Jenny have been off screen forever. Ive no doubt shell be quite the sight for sore eyes when she makes her return. She is returning right?

What if Jenny and Claire had a competition in the Epilogue? Thatd be a nice way to end the series, wed see the ladies one last time and that would be that.

Does anyone else think Maggie will make a reappearance later spraying milk everywhere and pregnant again?
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby jfingers » Sat Jan 14, 2017 10:05 pm

I agree about Maggie. She was always my favorite. Such a lusty babe just enjoying the hell out of being massively pregnant. I was looking forward to watching her swell into immobility with Bill's encouragement, of course. I'm sure she would not have been supportive of Bill's desire to reduce his sexual appetite. Oh, well...

Peggy said she is due any day, but that doesn't mean she can't go overdue. Maybe she and Bill will get together again before she delivers. She, more than anyone else in the story, can always get a rise out of Bill. Can you imagine her reaction if Bill hasn't recovered from Daniels' injection?

As for the rest, I'll be happy to see what GeForce comes up with.

It's funny. Given the scope of Daniels' meddling (groundwater!), Bill's report will set off a bombshell in Washington. Fertile Valley will be the first Super Fund site that everybody WANTS to get into.
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby fooman » Tue Jan 17, 2017 11:22 am

Interesting spin on this chapter was wondering where you were going with it and had waited with bated breath. Now to wait for the final and epilogue. I will also look forward to anything that will post of yours also.
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby Bryce101 » Tue Jan 17, 2017 8:34 pm

jfingers wrote:I agree about Maggie. She was always my favorite. Such a lusty babe just enjoying the hell out of being massively pregnant. I was looking forward to watching her swell into immobility with Bill's encouragement, of course. I'm sure she would not have been supportive of Bill's desire to reduce his sexual appetite. Oh, well...

Peggy said she is due any day, but that doesn't mean she can't go overdue. Maybe she and Bill will get together again before she delivers. She, more than anyone else in the story, can always get a rise out of Bill. Can you imagine her reaction if Bill hasn't recovered from Daniels' injection?

As for the rest, I'll be happy to see what GeForce comes up with.

It's funny. Given the scope of Daniels' meddling (groundwater!), Bill's report will set off a bombshell in Washington. Fertile Valley will be the first Super Fund site that everybody WANTS to get into.


Next chapter is the end so everyone goes into labor. They are currently eight months now and next chap will be nine. Skimming the original chapters Im not quite sure how far along they are but Im going to assume Jenny Lee conceived at most a month after Peggy. The first / thirteenth chapter had Bill impregnating Jenny Lee then the second / fourteenth had Peggy revealing her pregnancy. They might be due around the same time but Im assuming she was already pregnant and just then took the pregnancy test. Maggie is clearly nine months when Peggy is eight months. Claire is three months.

Claire - 3 months
Jenny Lee - 7 months?
Peggy - 8 months
Maggie - 9 months

This is a quick guess but I could always be wrong. If this is correct we might see Jenny Lee next chapter if only because shed be about eight months then and it would be a perfect time to catch up with her. Im not GeForce but my assumption is that the Epilogue will show a heavily pregnant Claire. Why? I dont think were going to leave her at four months and that be that. We already know that Peggy will be wrapped up in this next chapter but Im just wondering about the rest.

This isnt my story but Ive been thinking about various different ways it can go.

Nine Months could start off with everyone having issues going into labor. Unbeknownst to Bill and Maggie the fertility drugs also helped the ladies have a fairly smooth birth which is why they continued to have children. Now that they are no longer on the drugs yes they are still getting huge but the birth is complicated so at that point Peggy has to find something to induce labor. This would be something no one would see coming. Bill has not had sex since the incident where he got the injection. Maybe Peggy would send Bill out for castor oil or something. Bill could detail how she has worked out and the like because most everyone loves pregnant dancing and that would be a wonderful opportunity to describe how huge she has gotten as she tries to fit into spandex. This would also be a wonderful opportunity to add possible growth spurts. Real pregnant women have growth spurts at around thirty-six weeks. So maybe shes working out and has a growth spurt ripping her spandex and Bill goes out to buy a new outfit? Of course she could work out naked but its really just an excuse to get Bill out of the house because she has a surprise for him when he returns.

Continuing with that angle Bill goes to the store and there he finds Jenny Lee, now eight months and ridiculously large, lactating everywhere. She might be working or she might be buying clothing. Of course they have sex. This would be a great time to reveal that Bill is still having side effects from the injection as that ends her arc.

Bill returns to see Maggie, mind-blowingly pregnant and overdue, feeling up his wife. A reason for her being overdue could be that just as Peggy got Maggie to help Bill out she also told Maggie to stop messing with the food and Maggie is eating like them now. She also finds herself having issues with labor despite being so huge and yes she is loving every bit of it. Of course the no-sex rule is out the window at that point as Bill walks in and both of them want him. Bill would want it as well but maybe he would challenge them saying he enjoyed the game last time and hed have sex with the first one to make him climax. Remember at the end of the last competition Maggie and Peggie said they had to do it again? Here we go with a labor induction on the line. This is when both Maggie and Peggy find out about what happened to him and the side effects of that injection. Of course in the end theyd both be induced by Bill but thatd be a beautiful way to end their arcs.

That could end Nine Months and finish their arcs. The chapter might end with them giving birth and leaving the Valley and Epilogue could begin with Bill returning for one last project. It has been many months since then and everyone is mostly cured of the effects of the Valley. He returns and the first person he bumps into is a massively pregnant Claire, ready for him to induce her labor. The next person he bumps into is Maggie, heavily pregnant once more but now she too can spray milk like Peggy due to having just given birth. Maybe the two of them would compete for Bill? What can I say? I like competitions.

These are just guesses. Im not the writer but I think something along those lines wouldnt be a bad way to start the chapters and end the character arcs.
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby Mixful » Fri Jan 27, 2017 1:17 am

Something I am curious to see is what are they going to do with the rest of the babies. Let's think about this so right now Peggy and Bill have 8 children Peggy is pregnant with 5 babies ,Dee with 3 same with Debbie,Melissa with 5 and Megan with 8 but there is a chance she might be having 9 or 10 but let's say she is just having 8. So let's add this up 8+5+3+3+5+8=32. 32! That is a lot of bloody kids!

How the hell are Bill and Peggy going to look after 32 or more babies? That is a lot of mouths to feed! Do they have the money to even look after them all? Are they going to get friends and other family members to help them out? Or will they put the babies up for adoption give them to families that can't have children of their own? And seeing how we are not sure how many Megan is having she could be having 9 or 10 that leaves it to 33 or 34 children. I am going to find it a little hard to believe that two people will be able to raise 32,33 or 34 children unless they get a whole lot of help or they get lucky and win the lottery. Anyway that is something that I just wanted to get off my chest but I think you will be able to come up with good outcome because you are doing a really great job with the story looking forward to the last chapter and epilogue.
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby Whitechimera » Sat Jan 28, 2017 3:51 am

Yeah let's over analyze a porn story. They will get government assistance from fertile valley and a large court settlement. There, hope you feel better.
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby Mixful » Sat Jan 28, 2017 11:48 am

Whitechimera wrote:Yeah let's over analyze a porn story. They will get government assistance from fertile valley and a large court settlement. There, hope you feel better.

It's just something to think about and why not get into detail about it? GForce went into a entire chapter talking about the ovum and sperm in detail and how the valley made the characters body's grow.I know at the end of the day it's just a porn story but this one clearly has thought and effort put into it and you don't come across these types of porn stories everyday. Not trying to nitpick or anything it's just something I am curious about no need to get angry or annoyed.
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby DylanX » Tue Feb 21, 2017 3:50 pm

Amazing story! You're an exceptional author and it's amazing how similarly you match style to the originals. Even without the original, your writing is excellent and very enjoyable to read.

Now, my requests - more Sue! More Peter! More stuff at school!
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby Whitechimera » Tue Mar 14, 2017 5:16 am

Bump for updates!!
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Re: Continuation of Fertile Valley

Postby GeForce » Wed Mar 15, 2017 7:43 pm

Hello everyone. The chapter is coming, but not finished yet; my apologies. I've re-written part of my draft that, upon writing out, didn't feel right (too much focus on Peg & Mag).

The chapter is a beefy one: it has three erotic scenes in it and will include an elaborate birth at the end (thank you, Zaceria, for sharing your drive with birth stories - it is a great resource). I'm halfway, after the re-write, and I'm content with the story's pacing now. I will try to upload the chapter end of next week.

This chapter will focus on Bill and his family as they go through the final months of pregnancy and birth. The epilogue will be used for neatly tying up loose ends and answer questions related to the many, many babies, Daniels, the future of the valley, Jenny Lee, teacher Claire and Maggie - it'll likely follow more of a summary structure than an elaborate narrative.

Thank you, as always, for your patience and support. It makes writing this story a worthwhile endeavor.
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